Monday, May 19, 2008

I don't claim to be a great writer...

...but I think I could do better than CNN.com's Mallory Simon managed to do with this sentence:

"Personal trainer and fitness expert Robert Dothard said making exercise available and enjoyable in your home means reaching an audience of people who often feel embarrassed walking in to a traditional gym for fear of being embarrassed." (italics added) Jigga what?

Entire article here.

Update: The sentence has been corrected to read "who often feel embarrassed walking into a traditional gym."

1 comment:

Schmiddy said...

I'm not really sure what you are talking about here...I often feel embarrassed for fear of later feeling embarrassed. ;)